Saturday, January 9, 2010

presnt day

i think today is the coldest day of season when i got up in the morning and removed the curtains from window i could not see much because of the fog i found the usual warm dressing less and wore double set of socks be cause my feet are always much colder,me and my husband decided to children keep at home today due to fog outside so the day was cold and busy but fun i spent my time which i got out of the routine in helping my younger one in his studies


my hubby returned from office soon and we had conversation about many things over hot hot cup of tea especially about the movie we saw last night a Indian movie name 3idiot which we liked for its strong and beautiful message ,it was about a guy who wants to go for study to fulfill his desire of just learning his hunger for learning is strong but he is completely against the method of teaching used to be applied in institutions .the making of film was as beautiful as well as script was written mostly when we find the time for movie we prefer English but strong and effective topic can touch the heart in any language .

5 comments:

  1. What I meant by my comment was that the words are lovely, but the execution needs some work.

    "i think today is the coldest day of season when i got up in the morning and removed the carton from window i could not see much because of the fug"

    This should read

    "I think today is the coldest day of the season, and when I got up in the morning, I removed the curtain from the window. I could not see much because of the fog"

    If the text is hard to read, people will automatically leave your site for bad grammar usage and spelling. I'm not sure what your audience is, but I write as a part time living while I attend school for my PhD, and I had to stop reading part way through.

    As for Bold text, just don't do it. It would take me forever to explain this fact. I have a pagerank of 4 on one website and a 5 on another. I have learned what works and what doesn't.

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  2. Hello Shabana, you are right-- a strong topic can touch the heart in any *language*.

    XO

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  3. Baili,

    I hope it warms up there...very interesting article...I enjoyed reading it. Have a wonderful day.

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  4. That sounds like a very blessed day Baili. Also the movie sounds like a good one. Thank you so much for stopping by my blog and commenting on my latest writing. Yah bless and I pray you have yet another wonderful day.

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  5. How fun that you and your husband watched a movie and that it touched both of you... so much so that you were able to sit down and discuss it over a warm cup of coffee. It sounds like a very sweet moment.

    Take care Baili
    Paula

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