Saturday, May 8, 2010

shell of a heart



she tied her heart with a flying kite,

which took it on the extreme height ,

where sky grabbed it and turned in star,

i can feel the glitter in my soul so for,

wind plucked it from there threw into the stream,

she suddenly stopped flowing her silver dream,

she made it clam safe in her frozen chest,

to get it back sun tried its best,

one drop of my tear made melt it down,

waves brought it up to the green ground ,

flowers absorbed its fragrance ,when they get along,

like autumn steal spring' s cheerful song,

then a butterfly came and opened it with wings,

a light flowed out and sprinkled colors on every thing,

i looked in empty shell which had cracked but smiling walls,

may be taking is joy,but giving is more then all.

12 comments:

  1. Shabana this is just beautiful!

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  2. Hi Shabana. This is beautiful!

    Bearfriend xx

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  3. The whole poem is beautiful but this last line is great:
    "may be taking is joy,but giving is more then all."
    Best Wishes!

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  4. i like the title "shell of a heart" :)

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  5. very pretty poem. you are a gifted woman :-)

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  6. Happy mother's day to you.

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  7. Beautiful poem. Hope you had a wonderful Mother's day!:)
    Take care...

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  8. i just read this poem and then read your profile and from your profile i understand you live somewhere near India or may be Pakistan as your mother tongue is Urdu. Urdu is a wonderful language, it is sweet and is like honey and the same feeling is flowing from you in this poem. I really liked your poem.

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  9. I love it dear! Happy Mother's day to you!

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  10. I congratulate you for your blog has completed the century of followers (They are 100 now.)

    Have you noticed it?

    While my photo blog has only 8 followers.

    Best Wishes!

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