Wednesday, December 1, 2010

some time .................



some time pain crosses its limit, and becomes healing ,


some time we feel as much, that stop feeling ,

some time we show way to all, and teach them alot ,

some time we think as perfect, so ignore our fault ,

some time we are as close, cant see over all ,

then ego comes in between ,like a highest wall ,

some time we run very fast ,to win the race ,

and we leave ourselves behind and loose our grace ,

some time we try really hard and face quiet run ,

we win it then realize ,was not the one ,

some time we stay in the light for very long ,

and just forget the dark ,we really belong ,

some time we are very nice ,to every one ,

but cannot please them all ,and so got non.

9 comments:

  1. i think such was the live, nothing that steady always changed..tq 4 share :)

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  2. Sometime pain crosses its limit and becomes healing.
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    Wonderful Poem!

    Salaam Sister,
    I am glad to be able to come back at your blog after a long time.
    And want to tell that this poem really touched my heart.

    MashaAllah.

    Thanks and best wishes.

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  3. I like this -"some time we stay in the light for very long ,

    and just forget the dark ,we really belong "
    Nice piece of poetry..

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  4. i like this poem.. reminds me to stay grounded ^^

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  5. A very sensitive poem. This is the first poem I am reading from you. Very different from the other posts and very nice to read :)

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  6. Enjoy reading this poem, especially the first few lines about pain becomes healing and stop feeling. Lovely. Stay happy and healthy always and thanks for visiting me from time to time.

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  7. Wonderful, thought provoking, exhilarating, thank you for sharing!

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  8. Kadang, kehidupan yang kita terima tidak sesuai dengan apa yang kita harapkan. Tapi, tetaplah terus menjadi yang terbaik dalam hidupmu

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  9. amazing.....i loved the write...in desperation to be better we sometimes go overboard....to show the casaul we become callous...without even knowing...very beautiful write...

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