Friday, September 23, 2016

Once Upon a Time There Lived Tow Sisters [true story ] [image source google]

After  Neena left  Sara felt   peace as one feels after passing the storm.   She felt  the peace of  a person  who  saw the things clearly  after  removing the fog from front of  his  eyes  for so long .   Now  She found herself free from abusive behavior of  her little sister which was constantly testing her patience .The distance  that  came between her and Robin when Neena was here start  reducing  gradually .




Sara  could feel the ease  as  her  contracted  soul was trying to spread its wings  joyfully.Wings that had  been  stuck under the  painful burden of  unknown fears  .Her soul was ready  to  throw them away.  


But still being a girl she felt hard to step forward first  towards her husband .This hesitation was product of  her society in which she was brought up  . In her society girls were protected by their parents  . They  were not allowed  to play with boys after a certain age .They have to keep distance from their own cousins.




Their society was  divided into three main parts .One of them was so called religious and extremest  in his life style where mails were  predominating and women were treated by them like slaves  or animals.From  birth to death men control their lives and use their physical  weakness and mental  unconsciousness of their own rights and ignorance for their benefits .



Second group was of middle class where  environment of  life was quite suit able for the natural growth of  women . where they  were allowed to take  decisions  of their life within certain boundaries.



They were able to get education  and even to select their life partner approved by their parents .Still  they have limits .Much exposure  that could harm them was banned .Sara  belonged to to this group ,Though she was a confident girl but hate and fear for men caused  by worse environment provided by her father  built strong walls around her being through which  she could not breath without thinking that men are selfish and unfaithful they don't deserve trust of woman .
 



But  long and patient wait of Robin proved that he deserves her love and trust .The way Robin survived as  modest man fighting against Neena's  sensational closeness it  rooted his love in Sara's heart so deep.Sara  was waiting for the moment when Robin  hold her hand and she will not pull it back.



 On the other hand  Robin 's patience  was tested  by the awkward  conditions  he was put in by his sister in law often.He was patient and mature so he could stopped himself to make any mistake .Mistake that can scatter thorns in his way to Sara .He prevented himself from felling down where Neena was pulling him so badly.


Robin  wanted Sara to realize his sufferings.Being so close to hir and at the same time so away was a test he thought he will fail in soon.



One  day  he told  Sara that  he  is going to another city to attend an office meeting and will come back  after two days .That was the season of fall and they  were  sitting on the top of  roof of their  house .Sun rays were showering  softly upon the  brown face of earth .It was  Sunday  afternoon .Sara could see the upper branches of  the tree in their yard .Its branches were almost bare there were very few leaves  still hanging with few of them as requesting  to the branches that please dont let us go  hold us  we are the same whom you loved and  be proud over .





While  hearing this Sara  Felt as something is  sinking inside her chest ,She  felt  that right now she is  just like those leaves that are about to depart from the tree .There raised a unheard cry in her heart full of grief and sorrow .And Robin  saw  pearl like tears rolling down her beautiful cheeks .Robin  who was sitting front of her was surprised .He suddenly got up and came near to Sara he sat beside her and hold her hands in his strong warm hands  and asked .What is the matter Sara ? why are you Crying ? Did mom ...but he could not complete his sentence .Sara  said  Is it  possible ? 



what ?Robin  asked as he could not get anything .Can i go with  you Sara asked while her tears were still dropping  fast .Robin could not believe his ears .his heart leaped over but he want to be sure that is this what he got .He did not realized that his hold on Sara's hands became strong .I want to go with you please take me with you ,Sara  said and felt at the same time her heart free and light.

Though it was  an office meeting but Robin in that moment  felt on the top of the world .He could not afford to waste this most precious moment of his life .His eyes were dreamy and heart alcoholic like .At  very this moment he wanted to for get the whole world including his job. He decided  that he will take Sara along go to the same city but will not attend any meeting .He will spend each single moment of these two days with Sara .

He  could not hug Sara because they were on the roof and many other people were also far and near on their roofs According to their culture husband can touch  his wife only in privacy not front of others .But he told  Sara that ofcourse she can go with him he removed tears from her cheeks and it was first time that Sara did not object on his this move .They both got downstairs  with having peace in their hearts .They  got in their room and Sara prepared  luggage for the journey .


Robin  informed her mother about this and Helda felt as she want to kill Sara immediately .In this house it never happened before that any of her son gave as importance to his wife .I will not let her do this Helda thought  crucially she will have to pay for this sin.Helda felt hard to hid her feeling of anger that moment. 



It was  pretty freezing night  of  December  when Robin and Sara  left for Karachi.They sat  in the train compartment where already a couple was sitting.They both were quite healthy and of friendly nature .But robin and Sara both were walking in world of their dreams they were unable to see their surroundings .Their hearts were  pulling them towards each other .They wanted to be alone to share their beings with each other.Each moment were long as century .they both did not lay down whole night because to do so they had to move little  away from each other and they could not bear this .




They passed whole journey sitting beside each other ,when they felt sleepy Robin put his back  against the seat and closed his eyes he asked Sara to lay down on the seat and put her head in his lap.Thought Sara did not wanted to lay while Robin was sitting but just to feel  the touch of his warm lap she laid down and  fell  asleep like a child who finds peace in his mother's lap.


To be continued

54 comments:

  1. i have more of an understanding of your culture from your writings! Thank you.

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  2. Oh I love this story it is so beautiful!

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  3. What a lovely blog you have !

    Thanking you most sincerely for your so welcome words of solace
    I'm sending dear hugs on your weekend ahead and on your Fall

    Xx Daniela at ~ My little old world ~

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  4. thank you for this wonder-filled stroll

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  5. What a story you've told over these past few blog posts.
    I have enjoyed reading and learning more of your culture.
    The images you have chosen have complimented your words well.

    Thank you, I'm looking forward to your next blog post - whatever that may be.

    Wishing you a happy and peaceful weekend

    All the best Jan

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  6. That is a lovely story, the mother in law sounds a bit of a tarter.
    Merle..........

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  7. A wonderful read. I feel for Sara. Can't wait for the next post. :)

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  8. Beautiful post! Especially I like the third photo, which is simply telling your story.

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  9. I just love this story. It is so beautiful! ♥

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  10. Beautiful story. I looking forward to the next post!

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  11. Hello, beautiful story! Thanks for sharing. Enjoy your weekend!

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  12. A lovely story of life and love. Your culture in this story is of interest to me and you tell the story beautifully and with feeling.
    Thank you...I will be looking forward to your next post~

    Have a Lovely Day
    Jan

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  13. I'm so glad that you stopped by my blog, Baili, and left a comment! This story is beautifully written and emotionally compelling! Thank you for sharing it with the blogging world! Take care!

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  14. Such a lovely story, I love the way you write!
    xx
    LA VEINE

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  15. Very nice story! And you found terrific images to illustrate it, too.

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  16. Hello!:) As rose petals open showing it's full beauty, your story is unfolding in a delightful way. True love, comes from knowing and loving the person for his/her good character.

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  17. Such a beautiful and touching story...I really loved reading this.
    Thank you so much for sharing...:))

    Have a fabulous day.

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  18. Your visit to my blog gave me the opportunity that I was intrigued with your story-telling. You wonderfully wove the background of your society into this lovely story. I like happy ending.

    Yoko

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  19. You always share a lovely story☺ ♥

    summerdaisycottage.blogspot.com

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  20. What a beautiful story and wonderful images!

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  21. Amazing photos. I love your story too.

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  22. Amazing photos. I love your story too.

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  23. lovely story. a few spelling errors and typos.

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  24. Very beautiful!!!
    You're doing a good job with your writing in English!
    Big Hugs!

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  25. Loving this story. And I agree with DEZMOND. Future novel.
    Lisa

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  26. GRazie della visita, buona giornata!

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  27. your story has given me a greater understanding of your culture, it is interesting. your illustrations are amazing, almost as good as the story itself!!!

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  28. I love the way you combine images with the words!

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  29. You left a comment on my blog that I do not understand. The words do not go together to communicate meaning. Why is that?

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    1. I left the other comment on your blog to define my words sir,there was nothing profound or trivial just thought got my mind from that picture of your post

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    2. I left the other comment on your blog to define my words sir,there was nothing profound or trivial just thought got my mind from that picture of your post

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  30. Thanks for sharing this with the world!

    -Kati

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  31. You are a beautiful beautiful writer!
    Never quit or give up...this is quite a gift!

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  32. This is beautiful. I am worried for their happiness though.

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  33. A Great story based on limited freedom of choice within marriage which people in the western world take for granted. Most people like the romantic part of any story but not the controlling and interfering by parents, in-laws and other local religious beliefs.

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  34. as a photographer I tend to look more at the images then to read the story :(

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  35. This is an interesting story. I am glad that love won out in time.

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  36. This is an interesting story. I am glad that love won out in time.

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