Thursday, September 15, 2016

Once Upon a Time There Lived Two Sisters true story { Image source google images }

Neena   was  very  fun loving person and that made her  popular among Sara's in laws.But  it did not  upset Sara  .She was   gradually  feeling a soft corner  deep inside her heart  for Robin but these feelings were hidden and  Robin knew nothing about this change .



After  Neena  came here there were  lots of exciting  gatherings among youngsters of family and they play ludo or chess with  loud laughter  singing and  chats .Sometime  Neena played  badminton with  Robin's younger brother or sister  and while it elders in the house were just look at them furiously because the society they belong to young girls have to behave  in certain  way which had to be  sober sophisticated serious and modest .
  

Before  their marriage  girls were not allowed to behave so boldly,  they must put on scarf on their head and  avoid  talking to other mails except their own father brothers or close uncles .One thing  was  strange that Helda who was famous for her criticism she  was gentle to Neena and never objected on Neena 's any act .Actually  she  was happy that  Neena  due to her  bold nature can create problems between the relationship of Robin and Sara .And if it was so ,Helda would be the happiest  for she hated Sara for her simple  beauty and humble nature which  attracted  Robin towards her .




Robin and  Sara used to  have their evening tea together  in their room on the  table beside the window, from where  they looked at   the plant rows  and tree .They talked little  while sipping their tea and if there were they were of various topics of common interests  like books and music or  sharing  views on different  aspects of life .Without  mentioning any personal emotion for each other they  enjoyed  these sittings and  secretly wanted them last for  so long.Their  love for  each other was increasing every day but  there was one beerier  between and it was  Sara 's cold reaction on Robin's any personal expression of love.



Since  Neena  came here she  mostly rushed into their  room on such times and  destroyed their  enchanted  spell of silent love .Neena  deliberately often dragged  Robin  out of the room and forced him to  join her  gathering which Sara  used to avoid because  she  was shy and liked to be alone most of  time.

One  day when it was Sunday and Robin was  shaving  front of the mirror attached to the yard's wall while Sara  was  cutting  cabbage sitting  on  wooden board laid down in front yard .Neena was doing her home work on the same board.She  suddenly took her black ballpoint and got near to Sara .
 Neena  took knife  from Sara's hand put it down and started  drawing   lines on Sara's  face .Sara beard her  all  such stupidities and said nothing just because she thought that her words might had hurt Neena as she  is living in her house that is why Sara is  insulting her as she loved her sister so much and never wanted to hurt her .



After  drawing  lines  Neena dragged Sara  towards the mirror where Robin was shaving >Neena was laughing loudly while doing this and  showed  Sara 's her face in mirror and said   "look  how funny she is looking ",Sara  saw her face was messed up .Neena draw mustache ,circle around her eyes and  cheeks .Sara  tried hard to  keep her eyes dried and smiled ,Helda gave laughter from kitchen and same did the Doel ."What  are you thinking about it  Robee ? dont you find it  funny ?"Neena asked Robin who struggled hard to give little laughter .though he said noting and  walked into the bathroom and locked the door .

It was  Sara's maturity that since beginning she beard Neena's  such behavior .She  never objected on her humiliating behaviors  and now when due to hard circumstances Neena was living in her house Sara was more careful thought hurt because she thought that Neena should avoid such foolishness in front of other people.She felt that Neena mostly try to  drive Robin away and  Robin  inevitably join her .But   Inspite of all Sara did not feel insecure   because she believed that it was test for Robin's love .If he fails she will leave this house silently and if he passes she will be his partner for all coming seasons of life.She was not afraid of the beauty  and intelligence of her little sister .



When she was  alone she cried often ,She wanted to be with her husband but boundaries set by her own fears were making it impossible for her.Many nights when she wokeup she wanted to awake and say Robin that  come and sleep beside me on bed but it remained just a feared thought .Often she wanted to hug him when he said goodbye for office but instead of hugging him she suddenly piked up the trey and left room immediately .It was war inside her and she had fear to loose it sometimes.

Helda  realized  distance between Sara and Robin though she did not know the reason but she wanted to  take advantage of this situation and encouraged Neena to  be near with Robin .Neena  hated  their love story when she saw that Robin was completely unimpressed  by her beauty and joined her just to please Sara .She felt  helpless and her hatred  arose in her heart for her sister.Neena always thought of Sara as a just ordinary girl with stupid ideas of life .When she realized that Robin is not responding as she expected she started to make fun of  both husband and wife without thinking of their great efforts for her and her mom .

She  often said in gatherings that these  two fools  are made for each other and both are  of ordinary appearances and of  stupid way of thinking  ,always indulging in What is Good and What is Bad blah blah what a rubbish ..Neena  often said to Sara that your husband is so ugly how do you get so close to him?
Sometime to she tried to make Robin suspicious in the eyes of Sara and asked  her that did you noticed the way Robby was looking at me ? or did you see i asked for one thing and look he brought so many gifts for me ,ahh i know he likes me so much but not allowed to flirt with me  sis as he is very afraid of you she said shamelessly .And in reply Sara always gave a calm smile which  made Neena  more furious .


Neena  lived with them  for two years and this era proved test for their silent but deep love .Neena 's mother who witnessed all silently  because she  knew the level of the patience of Sara  and  disturbing behavior of her little daughter .When Neena finished her matriculation her mother wanted her to get married with some nice boy but Neena had high expectations from life her dreams and desires were  far greater then Sara's.


She  left Sara's house and went to a city near her native  village .She  started to look for job and found one as phone operator in a small  private office .Her mom was very concerned about her attitude because she knew that Neena is going against the rules of her society and tried hard to guide her towards right path but invain.Neena was ready to take flight towards her dream world.



to be continued

Dear friends sorry for late post  as my eldest son came just for three days to celebrate yearly festival Eid.
God Bless You All






42 comments:

  1. Interesting story love from Poland

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  2. Interesting story love from Poland

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  3. The story is getting more interesting! Have a great day!

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  4. Hello, interesting read and story. Thanks for sharing. Happy Friday, enjoy your weekend!

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  5. Keep writing! You obviouly enjoy it!

    I hope Eid was wonderful for you and your family!

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  6. It was worth the wait for this interesting instalment! Happy Eid.

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  7. So nice to get another lovely installment in this story!

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  8. I hope you had fun with your son and the festival!
    I love this story!!!

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  9. Excellent post (as always)!Thank you very much :)

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  10. I like the story so far. Hope you had a nice visit with your son.

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  11. Neena is very strange, but I wait for continuation.

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  12. Your story is progressing so well, I don't know how you do it.

    So pleased that your eldest son came home for three days to celebrate your festival.

    Take care

    All the best Jan

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  13. Good for Neena! Hope you enjoyed the visit with your son.

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  14. I applaud Neena for pursuing her dreams, but I'm afraid I don't like her attitude toward her sister very much.
    Great writing! Keep on!

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  15. The story is interesting, I also like the images you choose to go with it.

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  16. I like the way you writing and the story itself is interesting.

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  17. What a nice story , so well written!
    Great that you got your son visiting!
    oxo Susi

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  18. Interesting story and so happy you got to visit with your son ♥

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  19. Jealousy is a difficult emotion to deal with. I like that Sarah is very mature about it xox

    I'm happy you could have time to see your son ♡

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  20. so pleased to find your story here! it is an anxious time for Sara!
    Now following!
    Christineandhercamera.blogspot.com

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  21. What a captivating story! You have the gift of writing.
    Best wishes

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  22. Wonderful writing..beautiful and intriguing story. Thanks for sharing your creative magic, Enjoy your family time too!
    Victoria

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  23. Beautiful story dear! Thanks for sharing! xox
    Vesna - Home Chic Club

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  24. We are driving home from Canada and I had lots of time to read this and I enjoyed it throughly. You are an excellent story teller!! I love son visits!!

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  25. Hi Baili, Incredible story and writing. Thank you for sharing and also for stopping by and your kind comment. Have a great week and happy fall.

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  26. Hi Baili, Incredible story and writing. Thank you for sharing and also for stopping by and your kind comment. Have a great week and happy fall.

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  27. Great story! I can't wait for more.

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  28. Hi Baili, I hope you have an excellent visit with your son and come back soon to finish the great story! :-) Thank you for your very kind comments on my blog. Hope to see you often! Best regards from Seattle!

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  29. You write wonderfully, and this is a very interesting story. I look forward to the next chapter. Happy to hear your son came to visit for the festival. I have a son also and know that feeling a visit brings :)

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  30. Such a fun story you are writing!

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  31. More power to Neena... Waiting for the next part.

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  32. ;D

    Legal a história. Vou esperar pela continuação!

    Ótima quarta!

    Beijo! ^^

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  33. A son's visit is a time for joy. I see you have a love of language and story. Keep writing!

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  34. The story continues to be very interesting, and I can hardly wait for the next part. Neena sounds slightly obnoxious. I imagine Sara would be happy to have some peace and quiet again after she leaves. I hope she soon has the braveness to tell Robin she loves him. Two years is a long time to wait.

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  35. Wow...!
    This is so captivating!
    Looking forward to the next part....

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  36. lovely story and I like your choise of images.

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  37. Gracias por pasar por el blog tuve un error y se me borraron todos los comentarios que habia en algunas entradas que mal verdad.
    ‌Si sento si en alguna no te respondo por lo que ya te comentado.

    Me gusta mucho el tuyo.

    Me gustaria que si quieres comentes alguna entrada de nuevo
    Gracias
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