Saturday, October 22, 2016

Once Upon a Time There Lived Two Sisters {true story } images source google}

Neena  looked   at   the  weird   looking   man  who  was  trying  to smile  may  be  and  his two  fore   teeth  were  hovering  upon  his  lower  lip. and  failing  his  effort.   His  small  eyes  were  sharp  and  fast  moving . His  face   seemed  place  where  his  clever   attitude  played  lots  of  tricky  games  but  remained  fruitless  due  to  his  low i.q.  Neena   over   a minute   decided  that  she  will  bear  him  on   her  bed  if  it   would  be  necessary .  Dennie   was   most  impressed  by  her  beauty  as  when  he   hold  her  hands  for  greetings  his  hands  seemed  shaky . Neena   straighten   her  neck   with  pride  and   thought  that   he   seems  easy  bite .


In   this  first  meeting  Neena  knew   lot about  Dennie  .Among   them  most   important  was  his  occupation  .He   was   assistant   manager   in  one  of  a five   star  hotel  in  the  city .Dennie   told  her  the  plan  to  make  quick  money  as he   was   also  a  supplier   of  girls  for  the  rich  men  who  came  to   this  hotel   in   the  full  mood  of  enjoying  their  lives  and  spending   their   black   money  on  white   girls  who  brightens  their  nights    and  the   future  of    their  own...Dennie    told  her  to  not  waste  her  beautiful   skin   in   low  budget  market  and  cash   it  on  high  price    at   better  place  where  veges   are   far  better  then   former .



Neena   jumped  over  the  chance   with  excitement  and   after  just  two  personal   meetings  with   Dennie   started  to  take  her  along   to  present  her   before  the   different   landlords   and   businessman  .Suddenly   Neena  's  bank  account  was  increasing  quickly   and   Neena   who  has  already   start    drinking   in   the  company   of   her  customers   brought   bottles   with  her  at  home .Her   mother  was   fearing  to   death   that   How  to  stop   Neena   from  these  sins  as   she  was  hearing  the  footsteps  of  doom  creeping  towards    her.


One  day  she  asked  Neena  to  correct  her  routine  or   get married  to  that  man  with  whom  she   goes  out  in  nights   as   people  living  in  surroundings   started  objecting   on  them  that    such   lifestyle   does   not  go   with  the  society  we  live  in and  such   routine  of  your's   is   putting    bad   impact   on  the   modest  girls  of  their  houses .At  this  issue   for  one  day  Neena  fought   with  her  mother  as  she  was  drunk  and  she  used  abusive  words  for  neighbors  also   but   later   when  she   thought  over  the   topic    she   got  a  fantastic   idea  to  get  rid  of  this   depressing   environment .



Within   a  week   she  convinced   Dennie   that  she  likes  him  and   want  to    marry  him  as   she   is   tired   and   wants   settle   down   now  .Dennie    was   not  smart  enough   to  smell   her   intentions  or   Neena   was   more   clever   to  trap  him   it  was   obvious  so     soon  he  gave  up  before   her  attractive    offer  that  was  not  bad  he  was  getting  a   beautiful   wife  and  handsome  bank  balance  with  doing  Nothing  at  all.

 He  was  37 ,inhabitant  of  a  small  town  where  his  father  owned  a  shop  . Dennie   was  lazy  in  studies  and  almost  in  all  kind  of  jobs  that  required  bit  of  physical  or  mental   effort .He  was  as  mean  looking  and  thin   with  shaky walk  that   sometime  people  thought  him  an   in between  creation  who  is not  a man  nor  a  woman.

Though   he   got   a  wife   by   the  arrangements  of  their  parents  but  got  no  guts  to   be  a  support   system  of   her   married  life .And   it  was  just  customs   and   traditions  who  kept  bounded  his   wife  in  his  home  for   almost  one  year  but   still  instead   of  she  should   have asked  for  separation  Dennie   left   her  alone  and   ran  out   to  another   city   where  he  in  beginning  did   many   low  kinds  of  job   until   he  found  a  job  as  waiter  in  a  small  hotel .



Gradually  he  learnt  form  other  men around  him  how  to  take  short cuts .His  ugliness   was  biggest  hurdle   of  his way  otherwise  he  thought  he  would  marry  to  an  old   and   rich  woman   woman   and  would    live  an  easy  life   .But   soon  he  knew  that  his  personality  is  not  attractive  at  all  specially  for  ladies.  Still  latter  on    time   taught  him  his   real  job  that  searched  him  by  itself  as  one day   when  he  was  cleaning  a  table   a  man  sitting  one  a  table  blinked  his  eye  to  him  it  was  offer  for  sitting  front  of  him  so  he  sat .That  man  told  him  that  he  is  running  a  business   and  want  him  to  be  part  of  it  .The  most  interesting  part  of  job  for   him  that  it  did  not  required  any  kind  of  hard  work .And  since  then   he  was  supplying  girls  to    the  men  .On  each   deal   he  would  got  a  certain  amount  of   the  money  that  girl  earned    .

Neena  was   happy  to  have  her  targets  so  closed.  She   told   her  mother  that  she  is  ready  to  get  marry.   Her   mother  felt  peace  but  along  with  that  peace  she    also   felt  threaten  by   situations  that  could  come  up  After   Neena  's  marriage .

  Amanda  was  woman  of   opportunity  and   that  fact  revealed  upon  her  when  she   felt  a  change   in  her  attitude  that  occurred  with  the  financial  advancement    in  their  life  .Though  in  beginning  she  was  annoyed  with  Neena  for  her  very  bold  life  style  but  later  Amanda  felt  that  from  inside  she  is  not  as  angry  instead  of  it  she  was  happy  with  her  changing  status   in   society   .She   knew  that  her  daughter  has  became  a   call  girl  for  the  fast  progress  to  live  a  high  profile  life   and  she  did  not  rebel  against  her  as  she  could  have  done  lot  being   a  mother .She    showed  her   aggressiveness   little  bit  just   to  notify  that  Neena  could  not  blame  her  later  if  when   she  realize  that  being  a mother  it  was  her  duty  to  tell  her  what  is  wrong   and  what  is  right .



Amanda  knew  very  well  that  Neena  is  getting  marry  to  not  settle  down  in  life  but  to  fulfill     her  another  evil  dream.  Amanda  was  glad  that  her  daughter  was  so  clever  to  use   people  for   her  benefit .Deep  inside   Amanda   was  flying  about  that   after   a  long  painful  and  hard  life   finally   God  answered  her  prayers  and   gave  her  the  life  of  luxury   and  respect .Yes   Amanda  thought  that  it  was  God's  mercy  that  he   send  comfort   to  her ,  she  did   not  realized   that  God  has  created  a circle  of  Nature  and  people  who  live  within  it   lead  peaceful  life  though  not  luxurious  sometime  but  that  who  step  out  of  this  circle  they  get  lost  and  luxury  cannot  give  them  peace   and     a  calm  free  of  fears   conscience   ever.

Amanda   could   not  understand  that  whatever   we   do  chase  us   whole  life  until   we  get  it's  result  and  the  good   or  bad  effect  of  this  result  in  our  lives  to  paying  it  back  as  by  sowing  thorns   we  should  not  have  hope   for  flowers  it  is  totally   completely   against  the  laws  of  nature.

It   was   marriage  and   also  time  to  show  their  improved  status  to  their  relatives  back   in  village  and  to  Sara   who  was  married  to  a   civil  servant who   brought  few  thousand  monthly  and  lack   many  luxury  in   their  life  .  Neena  was  excited  to  see   the  reaction  of  Sara  when  she  will  come  and  see  her   new  well decorated  house  in  expensive  area  of  city  and  brand  new  luxury  car  in  porch. She  could  not  wait  for  that   moment  as   she   remember  that   how  Sara   do  all    work  of  house  by  herself  and   looked   like  a  maid   with  her  tiring   look  and  cheap  dressing  .Neena    visited  her  twice  since  she   settled  in  the  city  and  each  time  she  was  improved   in  her  appearances  economically  .


She   did    not   hide  anything  from  Sara  but  before  telling the  stories  of  her  cleverness it  was  obvious  to   make  Sara   realize   that  how  fool   and  unlucky  she  is  as  compare  to  her   .She  told   her  that  life   is  for  once  and  not  to  spend  with   just  one    man   who  imprisons   you  between   the  walls  of  his  house   and  provides  you  food  and  shelter  and  thinks  he  has  done  enough  to  make  you   happy . She    criticized   Sara  that   She  should  not  be  fool  with  just  one  sentence   that  he  tells  you  that  he  loves   you  and  in  return  you  look after   his  family  and  clean   his  house  ,cook  for  him  iron  and  all  other  that  does  not  suits   you  .look   at  you,   you     look  like  a  maid   when  you  don't   take  good  care  of   yourself   and  don't  go  even  beauty  parlor  to  save   his  money .

You  are  such  a   fool  ! Neena  said  to  Sara  with  pity   by  waving  her  soft  white  hands  that  were  looking  very   pretty  with   red  shiny shad  of  nail  polish .  Sara   gave  her  familiar  smile  that  has  calmness  of  contentment  and  sweetness  of  love  .She  said  to  Neena  that   Robin  could  afford  the   domestic  help  but  i  refused  to  take  because  if  you  remember  i always  enjoy  being   busy  with  house  chores



.Everyone  has  his  choice  for  enjoying  his  time,  ' Sara  said    calmly , ' i  really  love  doing  all this  with  my  own   hands  it  gives  me    sense    of  true  pleasure,
 as  this  family  and   this  relationship  is  like  a   delicate  tiny  plant  for  me   ,she  stopped  for  a  moment,   the  shine  of  her  eyes  deepened  and  smile  on her  lips  reflected  her  inner  peace  she  'i   feel   that  i   am  watering  and  nurturing  it  with  my  love  and  attention'  she  added.  it  makes  me  complete  .and  you  know  this  was  my  dream nothing  more  then it .Sara  completed  her  sentence  and  looked  at  Neena  as  she  want  her  to  claim  her  truth.


But   Neena  insisted  that  Sara  is  making  a huge  mistake  by  wasting  her  time  and  personality  like  this .Then   Neena  showed  the   love  letters  from  that  colleague  of  her's  that  proposed   Neena  .Neena   told  her  that  this  foolish  man  tried  to  trap  me  at  one  place  with  his  low   profile  life   but   see  i  was  clever  to  say  him  because  i know  my  value  ,she  said  with  great  pride 'i  am  young  beautiful  and  intelligent  and  with  these  qualities   i  can  earn   more  then  him  without  bothering   my   freedom  and   soon   i will be  able  to  find  man  of  my  dreams  with   luxurious  living .



Sara   was   amazed   with  her  revealings   she  could  not   believe   that   her  sister   could  go  as  low  to  achieve  her  dreams  but  Sara  did  not  criticized  her   furiously  although   she   tried  to  give   her   some  light  so  she  could   analyze   her  sinful   life  and  came   back  to  the  world  of   modesty  and   dignity .


Sara   told  her   that   she   is  ruining  after  a  mirage  and  it  is  nothing  but  just  an  illusion  .When  she  will   realize   the   truth   of   her   destruction   then  there  will  be  no  way  back  for  her   because  it  will  be  too   late  then  .Life  is  encircled   within   the   laws   of   nature   which   are  our   healthy   proper  growth    physically   as   well    as   mentally  .They  are   to   protect    us  from   being   unbalanced   because   balance  is   the  base  of   life   and   beauty  within  it . Balance  is  everything   to  us  to  live  a  peaceful  happy  life   and   if   we  ruin   this   balance   by   breaking   the    laws  of   nature   we  get   punished    sooner   or   later  .Nature   never    forgive  who  breaks  it's  laws.

Neena   gave  a  loud  laughter   when  Sara  ended  her  talk  and   said  carelessly   that   you   are  even  more   fool   then   i  thought   Sara   and   i  feel  sorry  for  you  .You   are   stupid   and   you  both  make   a  perfect  couple  .But   listen  to  me   carefully  Neena   suddenly  stopped  moving  her  legs  and  got   up  .she  came   near   and  stood  front  of  Sara   and  looked  straight  in  her  eyes  .That   moment  Sara  felt   fear  from   her  Neena   seemed    stranger  to  her . She  saw  something  stern   in  her  eyes   that   made  the  blood   slow  in  her  veins.



Neena   said,  'don't   you   ever   give   me your  useless   advises   if  it  makes  you  feel  better    then   say  it  in  your  heart  not  front  of  me .She   pressed   her  shoulders  with  hate  on  her  face  and   stepped  out  of  the   room   furiously.   .Sara   remained  in  a  shock   for   long   while  .She   still  wanted  to  say  to  Neena   that  choosing  one  partner  for  whole  life  is  not  a  stupidity    even   animals   live   this  way.She   wanted   to  warn  her   that  her   beauty   and   youth  will  not   stay   for   long  and  then  she  will  find  no  one   around  her   to   hold  her   hand   and   give   her  his   loving   companionship .

But  all  these  words   remained   unsaid  as  Neena  did  not   give  her   chance  to  say  anything  anymore .


Neena   decided   to  get  married   immediately  and  ceremony  was  in    a  five   star  hotel   .They   invited   Sara  and   Robin   and  all  the  relatives   from  the  village  .

to  be   continued....









33 comments:

  1. I love your story thanks for sharing

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  2. Lovely post dear!Have a great weekend! xx

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  3. This is getting complicated! I had a cousin who was a pimp too for awhile, until he got arrested.

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  4. if your intention was to tie us in (make us want more), congratulations

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  5. The sisters are so different! This story is getting more and more dramatic.

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  6. Wow, I can't believe everything that is happening!!!

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  7. The story of Sara and her sister continues to fascinate!

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  8. If only we lived in a world in which women were equally respected. Too many have to resort to losing their integrity and sometimes lives - for the sake of "survival." I'm hoping Neena and Sara find their way safely through this mess.

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  9. dramatic! I wonder what will happen next...

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  10. Neena has made her choice to pursue her goal no matter what! Poor girl.

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  11. you have me captivated with this wonderful story! Thankyou for sharing with us, I hope you are well, I have so much catching up to do!

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  12. Such drama, but such is life, right? Thank you for sharing!

    Poppy

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  13. The story is getting quite dramatic ...
    I await the continuation with interest.

    All the best Jan

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  14. The story is getting quite dramatic ...
    I await the continuation with interest.

    All the best Jan

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  15. Hello, interesting story. Thanks for sharing. Enjoy your day!

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  16. Love the image you chose for Dennie. He looks like a sweet guy. The sisters are so different. Thanks for sharing this.

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  17. A very enjoyable read, you have a way with words.

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  18. We will be waiting to see what happens next....

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  19. Creative post ~ and fun read ~ thanks!

    Wishing you a Happy Week ~ ^_^

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  20. thank you for visiting my blog
    best wishes..

    Rosi

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  21. your writing is improving so much!!
    this was a very interesting story...much detail and interesting narrative!
    well done, baili!

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  22. Hello Baili ... I very much enjoyed reading all this & look forward to the next part. Your writing is wonderful. Thanks so much for your visit & your lovely comment left over on my blog. Julie

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  23. It has taken some time to read but I have now caught up with the stories. Thank you for visiting my blog.

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  24. Poor Neena. I think I can see her future.

    Yoko

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